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When this poem first came to me, I thought it was about a prior relationship. The more I looked at this poem and worked with it to get it exactly the way I wanted it to be, I realized it was about so much more.

 

 

I look into my eyes.
I am lost deep in the blue,
Drowning…
Suffocating in your reflection
I struggle for air
There is no space for me,
only you.

You only look into my eyes to see your own reflection.
Consumed with yourself
Leaving no room for me
You fill my periphery.
In my eyes, there is only your reflection.

 

 

What do you think it is about? Let me know.

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Jennifer
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Wow, this is a wonderful poem, simple and deep. I wish I could compose a poem like this, but I do not have that talent. Thank you for sharing!

Kristi Cathey
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Such a meaningful poem. I love it! I’m looking forward to your next work.

Joanne Corey
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Powerful.

Vashti Q
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I can relate to this poem. It’s powerful and meaningful. Well done.

Evelyn
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Evelyn

You are the author of this poem? Wow. You’are really talented. I can’t do anything like this. Great one! One like for it.

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Thomas

Very nice poem. I like this. I want to read poems like this.